Jester's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[kratos from god of war]

what program do you use to animate

coolkranx responds:

Flash and sometimes tv paint

[Superman v2]

Great anatomy and really fantastic coloring, but I think you went too dark with the lips. I can't not see the upper lip as a little mustache. Neck seems a bit thick as well.

Still a ridiculous improvement on the first one; definitely keep doing whatever you've been doing.

Rhunyc responds:

Thank you very much for the honest feedback and crit! I had a hard time with the lips.. I usually do, and nailing the right skin-tone for them. I think it's due to just staring at the picture for so long that I lose sense of what looks right. The neck was another area I noticed was a bit off, but wasn't sure of that as well.

I appreciate the review!

[These Goddamn Bats Sketch]

1/10 doesn't look anything like batman

SerPounce responds:

Imagine a world where Johnny Depp was cast as Batman.

[SpideyKitty]

worst garfield drawing i've ever seen 0/10

SerPounce responds:

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/draw/5498b0a041892860fb8c2f3257eabb97

[Carousel Boutique at Midnight]

I really like the colors and the way you did the grass, but in the future you should work on keeping your lines straighter and do some shading on the building, cause at the moment it seems slightly tilted and too bright for night time. Still though I like the way it looks, keep doing what you're doing.

SerPounce responds:

Wow, now that you mention it, it does look tilted to the right a bit. I didn't even notice that. I suppose it is too bright, although I like it because if I had made it darker it would have been impossible to see all of the details.

[Lackadaisy Cat]

Not bad. You've got the coloring down pretty well, but if you're looking to start drawing then you should look some into anatomy and suchwhat. The path to being a good artist is a long one, but once you actually know exactly what to look for when you're trying to study, you'll improve ridiculously in a fairly short time. I suggest going to Deviantart and looking at the tutorials Cedarseed made for human anatomy, then the ones Tracyjb (Lackadaisy creator) and Alexds1 (The Meek creator) made.

You're on your way. A years worth of art studies and you'll be getting mad ass every time you whip out the sketchbook you'll probably have at that point.

SerPounce responds:

Yeah, bitches all over dem artist cocks.